Saturday, March 04, 2006

mixed - basant haiku

I
rang di chunariya
piya basanti
tore rang mein....

II
kesariyaa baalam
ki aaghosh mein
rut-rangat basant ki....

III
basant ritu
peeli sarson
meheki, beheki
leheki....



alliterative haiku

basant banished
barren blues
i blushed, bloomed .......

1 comment:

Ashish Gorde said...

I liked the alliterative haiku... the words worked wonderfully well.